[CREATE IT] My English :3 (?) ^_^/

بِسْــــــــــــــــــمِ اﷲِالرَّحْمَنِ اارَّحِيم

Ini adalah sedikit potongan dari naskah keduaku yang berjudul Breath-. Dengan kemampuan bahasa Inggris yang nggak bagus-bagus amat, aku mencoba menerjemahkannya. Meski pasti banyak kekurangan ditemukan jika diperiksa oleh kalian yang jauuuh lebih ahli, dengan senang hati aku menerima berbagai macam masukan dan koreksi dari kalian ^^/

Bagi teman-teman yang sudah pernah aku kasih pinjam hardcopy naskahnya pasti tahu part ini. Di halaman 118-119. 

Will this face replace the old one which always adorn your painting as far as the time?

                That question make her aghast. Spontaneously her hand movement on canvas cease when she get that Ms Kelly entering the art room and sitting down beside her. With unexplainable expression Mimi twists a very little smile at her close lecturer without any word to answer.”

                “Lately, i always look that face in your picture.”

Mimi’s feels her heart like stab by something sharp when she realize and corroborate the words of shoulder-length hair woman who looking carefully at her semi-finished picture. Really? How many times her little finger dance to draw the face that has a same shape. Oval.

Ms Kelly grab Mimi’s shoulder and squeezed it softly. “I won’t force if you don’t wanna tell it now. What about your feeling to face UK Art Award, the big event later?” She says while wrapping a smile in her face. She is the second person that very know about Mimi in this campus after Audrey.

Mimi takes a deep breath. She puts the brush on the palette then take her head toward her lovely lecturer. “Now, i feel like squeezed so hard by everything that fulfill my heart. This condition really confusing me so hard Ms. I’m too afraid and not have a brave to take decision. I don’t know.” She close her eyes and bent so down. Wish everything return like the old with Minwoo stay nearby when she disclose the eyes.

Really, she want to comply her father request who has struggle for her, but, is it possible? Heartly, she don’t wanna dissapointing her father. Then, is it right which has said by Audrey that it’s not about her unability to move on,but it just because she never want to try? And God, although she has turn away and ignore Bryce, his attitude toward her which never change though just a bit, almost make her ... no, now she is waiting for Minwoo.

“You are not tell me yet. What happen?” Ms Kelly feel worry when she realize that Mimi’s face turn to be gloomy. “Tell me anytime okay?”

                Mimi nod without lift her head because she is spinning with everything which fatigue her thought.

                “Thanks.”

                Spontaneously Mimi raise up her head and look at Ms Kelly with not understand face.

                “Thanks for become the part of us here. Thanks for so many pleasure which always you share with us. We are’nt just proud of you, but we also very love you.”

                At once, her gloomy face turn be affected face. “These are because of you all who always support me. I’m also have to say thank you. Really thank you.”

                “You always be the winner in every competition, and i’m so sure at this time you also will be like usual. You will be the winner of that nomination.”

                Mimi just twists a bit smile and nod.

                Again, Ms Kelly take a look to Mimi’s picture. Then she take her eyes to Mimi and say, “Also, i’m very happy because finally you begin to draw anyone else which different with the old one. Are you trying to welcome for the other guy?”

                Ms Kelly’s word which cross her ears like such rain of pebbles which fall and enwound her forehead. 





Versi Indonesianya kapan-kapan aku posting :D